Notes on Leanan Sidhe & Hagoromo

[elfcraft]

These two are part of a series of vignettes that I'm working on... I hope to collect them into a short-story length piece that I can submit to a few different places. My worry right now is that they're too dissimilar to seem cohesive, but I suppose I won't really be able to decide that until I've more written.

Comments

[erzebet.livejournal.com]

Those two are quite lovely. I have no critique to offer as of yet. :)

[quill-and-fife.livejournal.com]

Thank you! &hearts

I do have a question, however. With the stanzas broken apart like they were, was the poem in Leanan Sidhe still obviously a sonnet?

[erzebet.livejournal.com]

Yes. I thought it was, anyway.